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| Which Character looks the best | | Agent Grey | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | Vance | | 100% | [ 2 ] |
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Agent Grey
Level 1
Posts: 19
Join date: 2010-09-21
Age: 20
 |  Subject: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates*  Fri Jan 07, 2011 11:02 am | |
| -Agent Grey- sheet WIP Stand:  select:  Walk:  MovesetNeautral Special- pistol side special: grappling hook down special: C4 up special: Jet Pack Final Smash:Semi final form- Jet of Greyness -Vance- sheet WIP Idle:  Vance MovesetNeautral Special- Neos Cannon [chargable] side special: Neos Homing orbs down special: Neos bomb[chargable] up special: Teleport Final Smash: Full Neos Vance[final form] Full Neos Vance MovesetNeautral Special- Neos Finisher [chargable] side special: Neos X-orbs[ pronounced Ky-orbs] down special: Neos Burst[chargable] up special: Wings of Lance Chanler...coming soon Chanler is Vance's older brother. - Trash Bin of Deleted Junk-i deleted the images of the deleted people to prevent people from going blind. Zeek=  Epic Yoshi= 
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LegendaryNoob
Level 4
Posts: 339
Join date: 2010-09-21
Age: 18
Location: Pelvic Thrusting in front of this screen.
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Fri Jan 07, 2011 1:21 pm | |
| Umm......what?
With the exception of the JUS, these look bad.
But if you insist......
Agent Grey.
Needs better shading.
The right foot (our left) does not look right.
I suggest studying Kirby's anatomy before you continue, that way, you can know where the shading patterns and feet alignment are.
Epic Yoshi
Is this Yoshi wearing pants?
Dude with no name
Pretty ok, keep it up.
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cav10281
Level 3
Posts: 211
Join date: 2010-11-28
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:32 pm | |
| Actually, the JUS edit is pretty bad.
For starters, the shading sucks.
Obvious base is Bankai Ichigo with recolored Sasuke head. In fact, the only editing you did was take off the cape and cut the dress thing at the middle to make it look lige huge-ass pants.
The sword needs an outline.
The sword hand looks funny.
The sprite and pixel art of Grey is pretty bad. I don't like the idea, either.
The shading sucks, just to start. On both.
Pixel art
-THe gun doesn't have a thick outline like everything else, making it look out of place.
-Right hand sucks.
-You obviously used cirle tool and just made the hat over it, beign too lazy to get rid of the original circle.
-One leg is flat and he's tilting the other. Does't make much sense. ANd the tilted one looks bad.
-Hat's too round.
Sprite
-Stop using tools only. Learn to use pencil or paintbrush.
- Where's the other hand? His body's 45 degree's, his hand is like 90 degrees, or something. His feet, too.
-Hat still is too round. And it's badly made.
Epic Yoshi has pretty bad colors.
THe eyes look strange, as if he's looking down on the ground.
The cap doesn't match the style. And everything you just added lines to to make it clothes has shading out of style.
The shoes look funny.
The hand to the left has no shading.
The color choice is terrible. |
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StayPuft
Level 3
Posts: 158
Join date: 2010-09-23
Age: 17
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Sat Jan 08, 2011 4:44 am | |
| | cav10281 wrote: | Actually, the JUS edit is pretty bad.
For starters, the shading sucks.
Obvious base is Bankai Ichigo with recolored Sasuke head. In fact, the only editing you did was take off the cape and cut the dress thing at the middle to make it look lige huge-ass pants.
The sword needs an outline.
The sword hand looks funny.
The sprite and pixel art of Grey is pretty bad. I don't like the idea, either.
The shading sucks, just to start. On both.
Pixel art
-THe gun doesn't have a thick outline like everything else, making it look out of place.
-Right hand sucks.
-You obviously used cirle tool and just made the hat over it, beign too lazy to get rid of the original circle.
-One leg is flat and he's tilting the other. Does't make much sense. ANd the tilted one looks bad.
-Hat's too round.
Sprite
-Stop using tools only. Learn to use pencil or paintbrush.
- Where's the other hand? His body's 45 degree's, his hand is like 90 degrees, or something. His feet, too.
-Hat still is too round. And it's badly made.
Epic Yoshi has pretty bad colors.
THe eyes look strange, as if he's looking down on the ground.
The cap doesn't match the style. And everything you just added lines to to make it clothes has shading out of style.
The shoes look funny.
The hand to the left has no shading.
The color choice is terrible. |
lolcav
He can't help himself. |
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cav10281
Level 3
Posts: 211
Join date: 2010-11-28
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Sat Jan 08, 2011 11:41 am | |
| | Purple wrote: | | cav10281 wrote: | Actually, the JUS edit is pretty bad.
For starters, the shading sucks.
Obvious base is Bankai Ichigo with recolored Sasuke head. In fact, the only editing you did was take off the cape and cut the dress thing at the middle to make it look lige huge-ass pants.
The sword needs an outline.
The sword hand looks funny.
The sprite and pixel art of Grey is pretty bad. I don't like the idea, either.
The shading sucks, just to start. On both.
Pixel art
-THe gun doesn't have a thick outline like everything else, making it look out of place.
-Right hand sucks.
-You obviously used cirle tool and just made the hat over it, beign too lazy to get rid of the original circle.
-One leg is flat and he's tilting the other. Does't make much sense. ANd the tilted one looks bad.
-Hat's too round.
Sprite
-Stop using tools only. Learn to use pencil or paintbrush.
- Where's the other hand? His body's 45 degree's, his hand is like 90 degrees, or something. His feet, too.
-Hat still is too round. And it's badly made.
Epic Yoshi has pretty bad colors.
THe eyes look strange, as if he's looking down on the ground.
The cap doesn't match the style. And everything you just added lines to to make it clothes has shading out of style.
The shoes look funny.
The hand to the left has no shading.
The color choice is terrible. |
lolcav
He can't help himself. |
 (with women)
Wait, wait.... no, I can't. |
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Agent Grey
Level 1
Posts: 19
Join date: 2010-09-21
Age: 20
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Thu Feb 10, 2011 1:10 pm | |
| update
added new characters |
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Morph Boy
Level 4
Posts: 297
Join date: 2010-11-15
Age: 16
Location: You dare to know where meh lair is? DIE, FOOL!
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Thu Feb 10, 2011 2:53 pm | |
| I like that Vance guy. He looks cool. |
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cav10281
Level 3
Posts: 211
Join date: 2010-11-28
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:08 pm | |
| Eh, I dun really like the idea. Hoods are kinda of cliché.
Please completely redo Grey. And stop using eclipse tool. |
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Agent Grey
Level 1
Posts: 19
Join date: 2010-09-21
Age: 20
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Fri Feb 11, 2011 12:46 am | |
| | cav10281 wrote: | Eh, I dun really like the idea. Hoods are kinda of cliché.
Please completely redo Grey. And stop using eclipse tool. |
I used the pencil tool not the eclipse tool.
@Morph boy thanks |
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cav10281
Level 3
Posts: 211
Join date: 2010-11-28
| | Subject: Re: Figurezedge's Sprite Gallery *important updates* Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:01 am | |
| | Agent Grey wrote: | | cav10281 wrote: | Eh, I dun really like the idea. Hoods are kinda of cliché.
Please completely redo Grey. And stop using eclipse tool. |
I used the pencil tool not the eclipse tool.
@Morph boy thanks |
For the body. :/
And make Vance less an obvious edit. |
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